The Half Elven Orphan #9

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Captain of the Militia

Thirty years later, Aubree was in her fifties. She had never remarried after losing her husband. Ala had gently suggested some possible candidates, but Aubree had never taken any interest. Together, they lived quietly together in the same small wooden house that Aubree had invited Ala to join her in three decades before. They were not wealthy but they managed to get by. The house was drafty and it wasn’t in terribly good condition, but they managed to keep the main room warm in winter, in no small part due to Ala’s gift. She never let Aubree notice that she was using her fire magic to make the hearth burn brighter and longer. Ala had accrued quite a collection of skills that allowed them to get or make plenty of things that they could barter. Some things they could even sell for a little coin. Thetwick had grown to a size that should properly be called a town, though it didn’t posses a Ducal charter or the fortified walls that a proper town had. It did have a regular market, the only one in the whole of the Westmarch, which offered them a place to sell their excesses.

In 944, a crier came on a caravan. Crier was a big word, usually it was a job done by entertainers and story tellers, hoping to catch some coin for their trouble. There was a Guild of Criers, though and proclaiming the news without being able to display the guild’s symbol wasn’t likely to bring you any coin. The main the thing the Crier’s guild stood for, was the accuracy of the information being presented. This crier visited Thetwick a few times a year, he was a grizzled old man, with a limp. He wore the Crier’s Guild emblem on a chain round his neck, though he was only an apprentice. He had been discharged from the Duke’s regiment early because of his leg, Ala had heard. She’d gone to see what the caravan had brought, so she was close when he took his place in the middle of the market, climbing onto a stone pedestal that stood there for the purpose. She always stopped to listen to the crier, if she could, she often learned something new, at least, though not necessarily something useful.

“People of the Westmarch! Honoured Thets! I bring news today, of Taladaria, of Verdon and Sheffield. There is even word from far Erythrae! Most importantly, I bring news of the Counts of Oakharrow, news of a marriage!”

Ala listened attentively. Criers wanted people to hang around, so most of them begun with the most inconsequential information first.

“In Taladaria, there is a shortage of onions! The harvest went poorly and thus the price has skyrocketed! Perhaps, dear Thets, there is an opportunity there, eh?” it was a accompanied by a questioning expression as everything he said was embellished with great gestures.

“Who cares?” Someone yelled. “Get to the good stuff!”

“In Verdon, my friends, the Count fell from his horse, right on market day! It turns out, the honourable Count had partaken of a little too much of his own fine ale!”

“Did he die?” came another call from the crowd.

“Thankfully, only the great Count Louis’ pride was injured!”

“That’s not news! Get on with it, man! What happened in Oakharrow?!”

“Honoured people of the March! I wil get to that in just a moment. First, the news of Sheffield! Simon Urgyll, Baron Sheffield, has raised taxes in the Barony! There is great discontent and it is said that there are even whispers of revolt! Matters are made worse as the Baron is said to need the funds make is castle even more luxurious! At the same time, there are those who say it is long overdue, that the Castle in Pearson will collapse if it is not repaired soon! Who is to say who is right? I hope to be able to tell you more, dear Thets, when I next pass through your wonderful village!”

“Thetwick is a town, dimwit! Get to that Oakharrow marriage!”

“In due course, my esteemed people of Taladaria! First, I must speak of Erythrae! I have news of Crown Prince Hubert! He has won the last tournament of last year’s season, even at the tender age of sixteen! He vanquished the favourite, a Knight named Hillary de Briande, who serves in the retinue the Prince of Dirstad! Such prowess at such a young age shows great promise for is reign!”

He wasn’t insulted again. Ala wasn’t sure whether people had given up, or if they reckoned he was out of subjects and had to finally talk about the marriage in Oakharrow.

“Now, finally, citizens of Thetwick, I will speak of the news of your northern neighbours, Oakharrow. This Kaldmeer, Phoebe Sabran, Lady and heir of Oakharrow, of fifteen summers, married Acanos Botic, Lord of Vanskell! I don’t need to tell you, wise Thets, of the importance of this, I am certain! With no male heir in Oakharrow, the choice has fallen on this lord from Vanskell, brother of the Baron of a Selinan fief! The Botics are in great favour with King Justus the Fifth of Selinus! They are said to hold an importance and prestige far beyond that which is accorded to a mere Baron! Acanos is, according to Selinan traders a respected commander in Selinus who has led the King’s armies to do his bidding succesfully in the past! Does this mean the independence of Oakharrow comes to an end? I am not certain, dear Thets, but it seems that is likely to be the case! Perhaps then, here, in the Westmarch, far on the Western border of the great and true Kingdom of Iurrak, your situation has become more uncertain. The Westmarch shares a long border with Oakharrow… perhaps, it now also shares a long border with Selinus, our ancient enemy? Who can tell what wil happen next?”

He left a long pause and straightened himself up from his last exaggerated gesture.

“That concludes the news I have brought, dear Thets, please don’t begrudge your humble crier his bit.”

It was the traditional way a crier asked for money. He stepped down off the pedestal and removed his hat, which he turned and held up, so that people could deposit bits of silver in it, the customary way a crier was rewarded for his efforts. The same man would be telling stories tonight in and around the drinking hall, Ala knew, without his guild symbol on display. Many people came to give him money. The news about Oakharrow caused a lot of consternation and she could hear people discussing it all around her. It was obvious that the news had caused concern, which Ala understood, though she immediately felt the urge to learn more about Oakarrow and Selinus.

She already knew that Justus, King of Selinus and fifth of his name had not been on the throne for long. Ala had heard rumours around town that claimed that something had changed in Selinus since the old king, a half elf who had ruled for three centuries, had passed. Ala always kept her ears open for news about Selinus, as its Kings and Queens included the occasional half elf, including King Justus’ predecessor, Selinus VII. Selinus VII had spent centuries on the Selinan throne, meaning that Justus V was six generations removed from his predecessor. Selinus VII who was the Selinan King responsible for the peace that had held, to some extent, since 601. Justus himself was human, but it was said that his only child and heir, Viola, was a half elf too.

For weeks, Thetwick’s single drinking hall was lively with speculation about what the events in Oakharrow might mean. Ala didn’t dare go inside, of course, but she was kept up to date what the talk of the town was by listening in on the conversations of the horse breeders she often worked for and the caravanners that sometimes passed through Thetwick. Nothing of note happened until Wogekind 944. On a day that was shaping up to be as boring as many of the countless others Ala had seen, people started calling out that a caravan had been sighted. A few boys had come running into town from the fields to the south, bearing news of its approach.

It was customary for some of the farm boys to run into town when they spotted traders cresting Knockback Hill. That way everyone knew a caravan was coming and people had a chance to gather their wares and set up their stalls. Visiting merchants were a big event in Thetwick and Ala loved seeing the travellers and their wares. There were always riches, aromatic spices and exotic things on display, all things that Ala and Aubree couldn’t afford. Palady had always said Ala could go look at the caravans, but that she should keep both her headscarf and a hood on, seeing as not everyone took well to half-elves. Palady had reminded her of this so often that Ala took it very seriously. She had discovered early on that Palady hadn’t exaggerated. Thankfully she had been able to run away then. Still, caravans were far too exciting to stay away from. She often talked to the caravanners when they seemed friendly or harmless. Even though they usually seemed a little less prejudiced than the Thets, she always took care to make sure her ears were invisible and her hair was always dyed a mousy brown as Palady had always bid her.

A caravan always caused a flurry of activity, people would come into town, bringing their excess produce and any things they had made which they might be able to trade with the merchants. The boys that brought the news also described the approaching caravan to anyone who wanted to hear. That way, people knew whether it was big or whether the caravan master looked like he might be rich or not. The caravan that approached today was apparently both big and wealthy which was a reason for the Thets to make a special effort to bring out as many trade wares as they could. Ala always took the things she and Palady had left over, as well as items they made specifically to trade with merchants. She had dried mushrooms and herbs and Aubree was skilled at embroidery, making very nice scarves and cloaks when they could afford the materials. She was usually able to sell some things to the caravanners.

Raw produce was generally too voluminous a cargo to be worthwhile for the caravans. Things like home made spirits or iron bars from Irin mountain ore could be sold to the caravanners, as well as small, valuable items like richly decorated textiles or jewellery. As mining the Irins made one a prime target for orcks, the most important business that was conducted was the trade in horses. Trade with caravans was how most of Thetwick’s prized horses changed hands. It was the main reason for caravans to bother visiting the otherwise out of the way town. Other than the horses, Thetwick didn’t have anything else to offer that could not more easily be purchased without the six day detour that it took the average caravan to get from the caravan stop in Hightower, just over the river in Taladaria, to Thetwick and back. The road to Oakharrow was too poor and the ford over the Clearflow River too unreliable for caravans to continue North. The only other place to go would have been Seraphim but that was a dead end too, with no way for a caravan to make it safely across Seraph Creek into Greythorn.

By the time Ala got to the marketplace there were already men negotiating transactions and hands being shaken as greetings were exchanged and earlier agreements were reaffirmed. She realised she recognised the caravan, it was one run by the Von Taupenhausen family and it only rarely visited Thetwick, perhaps once every four or five years. The Von Taupenhausens were very rich merchants indeed. It filled her with a sense of anticipation, as the last time it had visited, she had met the Caravan Master’s daughter, a girl named Rosamund. Rosamund had been travelling with caravans since she was nine years old and was able to tell her many interesting things. Rosamund had even bought some things from her that visit. When Ala arrived, some traders were already unpacking items that were foreign to the Westmarch. She could smell the spices and see high quality fabrics being set out. The first disagreement of the day was also loudly being resolved. The argument was between Rosamund, who spoke with far more authority than Ala remembered from her previous visit four years before and one of the horse ranchers. Rosamund had been in her teens when Ala had last seen her and she’d grown into a buxom, pretty young woman who was obviously more interested in practicality than style. She dressed accordingly, wearing a dark, robust travelling dress, though it was well tailored and looked like it cost more than Ala and Aubree spent in a year. She wore the pin of a Journeywoman of the Caravanners Guild, a grade that she was young to have achieved. Rosamund had a kind of approachable innocence to her that Ala thought must be helpful when trading. Certainly, if her father left everything to her, she must be rather good at it.

Ala walked around a bit, waiting until the argument was over, since she wanted to talk to Rosamund. It didn’t take long for an agreement to be reached, it seemed to Ala that Rosamund had gotten the price she wanted in the end. She’d obviously noticed Ala hovering nearby.

“Ala, wasn’t it?” said Rosamund as she saw her approach. “You haven’t changed a bit. Again.” The young woman was smiling, but was clearly wondering how that was possible.

It was about four years since the last time the Von Taupenhausen caravan had visited, a fact that Ala hadn’t really thought about. She felt like she had to explain.

“I’m… a half elf… Mistress,” whispered Ala, hoping no one else would be reminded of it.

“Ah. That sort of explains it, a little. The first time I was here must be a decade ago. I think you looked the same then too. Anyway, good to see you. How are things in the Westmarch?”

“Much the same as your last visit. Not much goes on in Thetwick.”

Rosamund nodded, scanning the area before looking back at Ala. “I see you have a bag. Did you bring some things to trade? We’ve just come from Peyrepertuse, so we’re nigh on empty and I’m looking to replenish all manner of things. I’m afraid I don’t have much time to chat right now, father leaves most things to me these days while he… well I don’t think he does much of anything. So come on, what have you got?”

Rosamund bought everything she had with her, giving her a price that seemed more than fair. The woman gave the impression of wanting to buy half of Thetwick if she could get the price she wanted. Ala was a little disappointed that Rosamund didn’t have time to chat, but she was pleased she’d managed to sell everything so quickly. She continued along the length of the caravan to see if there was anything else interesting, since she now had quite a few silver coins, taking care to stay out of everyone’s way.

She noticed a burly, muscular man in chain mail with a moustache and sideburns standing by a powerful looking horse, checking its saddle. He seemed out of place. He had more bearing than she would have expected from a caravan guard and he carried himself with a different intent than a guard, she thought. His back was straighter and his eyes keener. He wore a large and beautiful longsword at his hip. She was sure the weapon had to be worth a fortune. On his belt there was also an elegant dagger with a wide crossguard and a belt pouch. His horse was a slightly aged, but still mighty, destrier. It had a kite shield slung behind the saddle on the right, displaying the Duke’s colours.

Ala was as fascinated by swords and swordplay as she had ever been. She was always interested in people who looked like they knew what they were doing with a blade. She still desperately wanted to learn how to use one. Any warrior who carried a sword like that with such practised ease fascinated her. She still spent a lot of time pretending sticks were swords, swinging them about when she was alone in the forest. She had even made herself several wooden swords over the years but she didn’t really have friends to practice with. Anyone she had managed to rope in swiftly lost interest or was scared off by her intensity.

She wondered if the man was a noble. Only nobles and their men-at-arms were allowed to wear swords. His shield only displayed the Duke’s colours though, not a full coat of arms. That was strange for a noble, they usually wanted to display their wealth and having a craftsman elaborately decorate a shield was a preferred way to do so. Not that she had seen many nobles, but those she had seen had often had shields which proclaimed their coat-of-arms. She knew a man-at-arms, as a member of the Duke’s retinue, also normally displayed the full coat of arms of the noble he served on his shield. She didn’t think it was a rule though, more of a very common custom. It did leave her wondering who this man was, since he was armed, but not a man-at-arms or a nobleman. Rosamund surely knew, but she was engaged in another lively negotiation.

Caravan guards were also allowed to be armed of course. They had to be signed under a caravan master’s charter to make it legal. But it didn’t make sense for a caravan guard to be displaying the Duke’s colours. If they displayed anything it was usually the caravan guild’s seal, but most didn’t even bother with that. If the caravan came all the way from Peyrepertuse, Ala decided that the man might have something to do with the Duke’s regiment, even if he was alone. Only a Duke, Prince or a King was allowed to keep standing regiments and the men who sometimes returned to the Westmarch from their service had the same straight backed posture that this man had.

If an army or a war band was marshalled it consisted of nobles and their knights and men-at-arms and the standing regiments kept by Dukes and Kings. The only thing Ala could think of was that this man must be a member of the Duke’s Regiment. That was even stranger. Since when did the Regiment dispatch individual soldiers anywhere? The men who returned from it didn’t normally return riding war horses sporting the Duke’s colours. She had to admit this man looked capable and experienced enough, but she thought that soldiers of the Duke’s regiment always travelled in groups.

The interesting looking warrior was around fifty years old and she could tell his moustache and sideburns hid some nasty old scars. He seemed to be taking in his surroundings, taking a long moment to look around him. He took a deep breath, breathing in through his nose, like he was smelling the air. Like someone coming home after a long absence, Ala thought to herself. Two of the teamsters were unloading heavy iron bound chests and long bundles wrapped in canvas from the cart. The big man said something to them and went to talk to Rosamund’s father, the caravan master, who rose to bid him farewell. Ala was watching all this with interest. The two men clasped hands and a small pouch was exchanged, which Master Von Taupenhausen seemed pleasantly surprised by. The warrior called to some of the many children standing around watching the caravan.

“You, with the dirty hair, and your friend. Also, you two, stop throttling each other or whatever that is you’re doing and come here, I have a job for you.”

The four boys stopped what they were doing and approached him warily.

“Want to earn some money, lads? How about it? You going to carry those chests and for me? Help me put those bundles over my mount for me?”

The bravest of the four, the boy with the dirty blonde hair looked at him. Ala knew him of course, his name was Chad. He frowned before speaking.

“How much, milord?”

“An eighth each.”

Chad nodded to the man, then gestured to his friends to come forward. They came to where the bundles and chests stood, each attempting to carry one.

“Hold on lads, here’s some rope, tie the bundles together so we can put them over Rico’s saddle. It’s not far, that’ll be fine for the walk. You lot are going to have to carry the chests, got it?”

With some direction, the chests and long bundles, which seemed to be long weapons, like spears and halberds, were manoeuvred onto either side of the horse, tied together so that the weapon bundles hung on either side of the animal. The warrior carefully checked that the rope wouldn’t chafe, making some adjustments so that there were several layers of leather and padding in between the horse and the rope. Ala liked seeing that he cared for his horse, she had seen people treat their mounts very differently too often.

Some other boys were now looking on enviously. There weren’t many opportunities for children to earn an eighth in Thetwick. The four boys struggled with their heavy cargoes and made slow headway. They quickly adapted, switching to dragging the chests behind them. The big man followed behind at a leisurely pace, leading his horse in an unhurried manner.

He seemed content just to look around, not minding the slow progress at all. Some of the other children had started to follow too, but they quickly grew bored with the slow pace. The man clearly knew where he was headed. Soon Ala was the only one still cautiously following, though she was keeping her distance.

“Girl, I can see you, you know,” the big man called to her.

She stopped.

“Stop hiding!” he continued, “come up here and walk with me, you can make yourself useful by answering some questions if you’re so set on seeing where I’m headed.”

Ala considered running away, but the man’s sword was just too interesting. He didn’t seem angry, more goodnatured than anything else. She was too curious. She stepped out from behind the tree where she was hiding and hurried forward and fell in beside him.

“Sorry milord,” she said.

“I’m not a lord.”

She glanced at his sword. He noticed her look. “Confused by the blade, are you?”

She gave a small nod, not really daring to say anything.

“The Duke has allowed me to continue bearing weapons as his man-at-arms, even though I’m retired from his regiment now. Nice of him huh? Though, of course it’s in his name that he asked me to wield it. What’s your name, girl?”

“Alagariel… sir… they call me Ala…” She decided to be bold, “what’s yours… sir?”

He stopped walking, “wait? Alagariel? Really?” He turned towards her so she turned towards him too, if a little apprehensively.

“Take down that hood,” he commanded with a nod of his head.

She decided it was better to do as she was told. His tone was that of one accustomed to having his orders followed.

“Well, well. Quite the beauty. Of course… age much slower… a few more years… well maybe more than a few…” he muttered more to himself than to her, nodding slightly.

Then his eyes lit up, as if he had thought of something. “Is Aubree still around?”

Suddenly he seemed animated. She was almost shocked, then decided it wasn’t a strange question if Thetwick had once been his home. Aubree was around the same age as he was.

“Yes, master. I live with her now. Since her husband died.”

It wasn’t strictly true. Aubree’s husband had died a few years earlier by the time Palady passed away. If Ala told the story this way though, it sounded less like charity. In the meantime Ala was thinking. She remembered a young boy, Bernie… he had left to join the Duke’s Regiment when he was around twelve or thirteen. This could be him, she decided.

“Aubree’s a widow? Hmm….” He seemed to consider that for a moment, then changed the subject.

“You know Old Kendrick? You must have, you’re older than I am. Anyway, he once told me the story about the patrol that brought you in. I was a wide-eyed little boy, wanting to know all about soldiering. Kendrick must be long gone by now, eh?”

“Yes, master,” she said, like she always did when adult humans who told her something she already knew and expected her to answer.

“I’m guessing… that must have been… around a century ago by now? It must be something like that. Palady, I think that was her name, wasn’t it? She was the only one who would look after you, or that’s what Kendrick claimed. Brave woman. Aubree is her great-granddaughter.”

The way he said it like a sort of history lesson.

“I know, sir… sorry… master.”

He looked puzzled for a moment as he thought. “That’s right. Of course you do. Silly of me. You were there…” he stopped again for a moment to look at her, clearly considering something.

“You just look so young…” he continued. “Takes some getting used to you know, when you meet someone who looks like a child… and then thirty years later she still looks like one… well just perhaps fourteen or fifteen winters now, maybe, if you were human. I suppose there is some difference. Still, it’s… unusual,” he said, somehow feeling that he needed to explain why he was telling her things she already knew.

Ala felt some sympathy for him. She supposed from his point of view, it was a little strange. Even if he’d met elves and half elves on his travels, he was unlikely to have ever met very young ones twice with three decades between meetings. She forgot about her theory when another thought came to her. She was suddenly curious if he knew anything about her she didn’t.

“I never really spoke to Old Kendrick, sir, I don’t think… what did he say, sir? Was he really there, do you think? I only know what Palady told me.”

He turned away from her and continued walking, the horse following along. The four boys had made little progress. Ala wasn’t sure they would think it was fair pay in the end, considering how hard the work was.

“He was… well,” he seemed to consider for a moment, “the tale he told seemed believable. Or it did when I was thirteen. I have no reason to doubt it and no way of knowing whether it was truthful. In all honesty I have no way of knowing for certain, Alagariel. I’ve known men who like to exaggerate, but then I have also known those who downplay things or say nothing at all. I… I don’t rightly know how Old Kendrick measures up. I wasn’t really thinking about that sort of thing when I was thirteen.”

He stopped to consider her a third time.

“This is a bit of a shock for me, girl. Girl? You’re older than I am. I have a full military career, even manage a little distinction through my service. I come back home… and you’re still adolescent. You look as old as I was when I left. You’re some sort of elf mix are you? That’s what my ma always said.”

“Yes sir. I’m a half-elf.”

There was something about the way he asked, like he didn’t believe her. Where else did he think the slow ageing and the ears came from, she wondered?

“If we’re going to get along, Alagariel, stop calling me sir. I’ve worked for a damn living all my life.”

“Yes s… uhm… what do I call you then? Is master alright… s… ehh… ma..ster?”

She wasn’t about to use ‘Bernie’ after all.

“Oh yes… you wouldn’t know that. I’m Bernard. Just call me Bernard.”

“Uhm… OK.. Master Bernard.”

“So how do you keep yourself busy, Alagariel?”

She was surprised by the question. Adults didn’t normally ask her anything they wanted a real answer to.

“I go to school. Sometimes. I help in the fields during the seasons. Sometimes I hunt. Mainly I help the horse breeders.”

“So you know horses?”

She shrugged, “they seem to like me… si… Master Bernard.”

“Do they? That’s good then, there’s always a place for people who know horses.”

“Are you good with a sword?”

He grinned, “where did that suddenly come from?”

She shrugged, “I like swords.”

“Well, I’d say I’m pretty fair. Good enough for the Duke anyway. There’s places where that means something.”

“Do you know how to teach people to sword fight?”

“You’re just full of questions aren’t you? I’ve taught before, yes. Quite a lot. The Duke has a Regiment to run and all… why?”

“Will you teach me?”

He frowned, “what on Vatan for?”

“Well… I just really want to learn… Please, Master Bernard?” she asked, worried she sounded as if she was pleading. She was, of course, but it wouldn’t do to sound that way.

His look changed to mild surprise as he realised the intensity with which Ala was regarding him.

“Really? A girl who wants to learn to sword fight? That’s not something I hear every day.” Bernard looked at her again for a moment, quite seriously, before he spoke again. “I will consider it,” he said, in a way that made her believe he meant it.

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The Half Elven Orphan #8

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Chapter 2: Age of Adolescence

The history of the Westmarch has long been defined by the conflict between the Kingdoms of Selinus and Iurrak. Ever since Yves the First founded the sublime Kingdom of Iurrak in 521, just after his great and most righteous rebellion against Viola the Third of Selinus, the two great lands have never managed to improve their relationship beyond a prickly tolerance. When sentiments became violent, the conflict has inevitably played out in the three fiefs that lie between Selinus and Iurrak, Saskill, Oakharrow and the Westmarch from north to south.

The wise and great King Gabriel the First of Iurrak made an ill fated attempt to alleviate the constant disagreements. He negotiated the Peace of Equals, ending eighty years of war between Iurrak and Selinus in 601. In that treaty, it was agreed that Saskill, Oakharrow and the Westmarch would form an independent buffer Kingdom between Selinus and Iurrak. Of course, this would turn out to be short lived. Selinus soon after usurped the Saskill title through marriage and skulduggery. The Kings of Iurrak had little choice but to eventually do the same, though they attempted to abide by the terms of the treaty for another two centuries before Annette de Baerle married Ivan, Duke of Taladaria at King Humphrey the Fourth’s behest in 814. So, the title of the March passed to the Duke when the last regnant Marquis, Xavier, passed away. It is for this reason, that, to this day, the Duchy of Taladaria is the only title within the Iurrakan peerage permitted to hold two regnant titles unified within one person, a right formalised in a special agreement between the King and Peers of Iurrak.

From the Encyclopedia Royalis Iurraka, edition of 975.

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The Half Elven Orphan #7

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Learning Things

Ala still went to the school every now and again, usually for a few months or weeks at a time. Normally she would go again whenever a new temple sister arrived from outside Thetwick. New sisters tended to bring new knowledge with them, which was exciting. The temple always offered a few years of schooling to the villages’ children, officially until the age of ten, but Ala’s repeated presence was always tolerated as long as she helped whoever was teaching where she could. The sisters took turns teaching the classes in the mornings. Children with aptitude for it were taught to read, write and do basic sums. Ala already knew how to write in elven from before she came to Thetwick, but she always wanted to improve her command of the human language. She knew she had a ever so slight accent that she’d never quite been able to shake.

New sisters teaching in the school seemed to be better trained in sums than the ones who had been there decades before, like Deirdre. It made it worthwhile to go back every few years. There was usually at least something new to be learned. Ala was certain she had learned all that anyone around her knew about the history of Taladaria and Thetwick. She’d experienced most of what had recently happened in Thetwick herself, which the humans seemed to collectively forget all the time. It sometimes made things awkward, when people claimed that their father or grandfather had done something which she knew to be untrue since she’d actually known the person in question.

Very occasionally, school was very interesting. Not long after the meeting hall had been erected in Thetwick, the Temple of Ceres seemed to have taken a renewed interest in its flock in Thetwick. In the summer of 924, the Temple was visited by a woman, a Canoness, whose arrival caused quite some consternation in the Thetwick Temple. The sisters almost decided to send Ala away from school, until Gera, now advanced in age herself pointed out that Alagariel only looked ever so slightly older than the customary ten years of age that most ended their schooling in Thetwick. So, thanks to Gera’s intervention Ala was attending class, keeping to herself when the Canoness, a stern looking lady named Clair Fichot attended the lesson to observe. The sister who was teaching the class was clearly unnerved by the woman’s presence. Ala had to admit she did look quite severe.

The lesson continued. It was a history lesson that Ala had heard many times. Most of the sisters did not have much of an interest in history and today’s teacher was no different. Not much changed about in that respect, even when new Sisters arrived. Ala, seeing as she had heard it all before was mainly paying attention to the way the stern woman’s scowl was rapidly turning more pronounced as the lesson progressed. Only a few minutes in, she spoke.

“Sister, if you don’t mind, I’ll take over today’s lesson. Why don’t you sit down and observe?”

The sister nodded and quickly say down in the back, not far from Ala. The Canoness made her way to the front of the classroom and cleared her throat.

“Now children, today I’m going to tell you a bit more about the history of your home. I will be asking questions later, so pay attention.”

The woman certainly had Ala’s attention. She’d always been curious about the history of the Westmarch, but the sister’s usually didn’t go back very far and only covered a time that Ala had actually experienced. Ala had long learned that it wasn’t a good idea to point out discrepancies that she knew about because she’d been alive during the events being described.

“First of all, is there anything any of you particularly wants to know about?”

Ala was excited, since she had lots of things she wanted to know about. It was only after no one else reacted that she dared to raise her hand.

“You, young lass, what is it you want to know?”

“Err… Canoness.. I… well I was hoping you could tell us something about how the Westmarch came to be?”

“Those are things that happened very long ago. But alright, why not? So, how the Westmarch came to be a march, let’s discuss that, shall we?”

Ala nodded eagerly.

“Around 601… you do know all know the current year is 924, don’t you?”

From the blank looks it was clear not everyone did.

“So that’s… three hundred and twenty three years ago, when a peace agreement was reached between Selinus and Iurrak after eighty years of war. That peace was signed at the Ford Inn, where the road to Taladaria crosses the Iceflow river. It was agreed between King Gabriel the first of Iurrak and King Selinus the seventh of Selinus.”

This was all new to Ala and she was loving it.

“Now, this peace led to the Westmarch being formed. The two Kings were tired of all the war between their countries and they were looking for a way to stop it happening again. So, they agreed that three fiefs would become a buffer between Iurrak and Selinus. In the North, bordering the sea, that was Saskill, then Oakharrow in the middle and in the south, the Westmarch, where we are now. Of course, it wasn’t called the Westmarch back then. I’m not completely sure what it was called but one name I’ve heard for it is ‘Difayakwininos’, which I’m probably pronouncing wrong. It’s said that it’s elven in origin but it doesn’t sound anything like any elven I’ve ever heard.”

It sounded familiar to Ala, though it wasn’t quite normal elven she was sure. Part of it sounded like the elven word for ‘house’. She decided not to let on that she understood elven. As Ala was thinking about the old name, Canoness Fichot looked around the room. She had the children’s attention. It was hard to know why but somehow, when she talked about history it seemed far more interesting than what Ala was used to.

“So, Saskill and Oakharrow were independent counties. The Westmarch was made into a march, probably because it also had to guard against attacks from the Orck Mountains and a Marchioness has more rights to hold troops than a Count does. You do all know that the Orck Mountains are south of the Irins that border the Westmarch in the south? The orcks come down in great hordes every few decades and the Westmarch is the first line of defence against them.”

Ala knew about the orcks of course, but the revelation of there being a Marquis was strange news to Ala. She was certain there was no current Marquis in the Westmarch. The Canoness spotted her look of puzzlement.

“Do you have a question, young lady?”

“Eh… well… what happened to the Marquis? There isn’t one is there, mistress?”

Clair Fochet smiled, the first time Ala had seen her do so. It was a very different look.

“Very astute. Actually, there is though. Does anyone know who the current Marquis of the Westmarch is?”

This drew blank stares all around, eventually Sister Penny, who was still sitting in the back, raised her hand.

“Yes, Sister?”

“It’s the Duke of Taladaria, isn’t it?”

“That’s right. It’s not really a part of the story about how the Westmarch came to be, as it happened much later, but the title of the Westmarch passed to the Dukes of Taladaria much later by marriage. Now, it’s not customary for a Lord to hold two regnant titles, but it’s the way things are in the case of the Westmarch. It’s generally frowned upon and I imagine the King of Iurrak accepts it because the Westmarch is so sparsely populated that it needs the Duke’s soldiers if it is to be able to defend Taldaria both from the Orcks and Selinus. Mostly, Kings are quite strict about the one regnant title per person rule. Anyway, now back to the story of the Westmarch and the Peace of 601.”

Ala was sure she’d never had quite as interesting a history lesson in the Temple of Ceres ever before.

“Well anyway, it seems that the intention was that eventually Saskill, Oakharrow and the Westmarch would become a small Kingdom that would stop Iurrak and Selinus becoming angry at one another. It never happened that way though. Selinus soon annexed Saskill though I don’t really know how that happened without it leading to another war. Perhaps it was through marriage, I would have to study it more than I have so far and I simply haven’t had the time.”

Ala went home that day with a lot to think about. Unfortunately the Canoness didn’t stay for long and school went back to being more or less the same immediately after the woman left. It made her sad, she could think of many more questions she wanted to ask the woman. The subject went back to religion, which the Sisters seemed to spend a lot of the school’s time repeating. Mostly, they went on and on about their goddess, Ceres, who was a very boring goddess who was seemingly mostly interested in bovines and agriculture, two subjects that Ala always found it difficult to concentrate on. While she could kind of understand why such a goddess was important in a farming community like Thetwick, she wished the sisters wouldn’t talk about it as much. She preferred hearing about different gods, which the sisters infrequently discussed. Sometimes Guanshiyin, the lady of Compassion was mentioned or Mars, the god of War. Sancus, Belus and Wotan existed too, Ala knew, but their jobs were hard to understand. Belus seemed to be popular in the south and Wotan in the North. There were even more, but other than acknowledge that more did exist, the sisters of Ceres did not consider it fitting to discuss them in their classroom. Ala tried to convince them too, but they told her it wasn’t allowed. Pressing them further only resulted in finding out that the High Priestess in Dirstad had forbidden talk of other gods. Ala didn’t even know there was a place called Dirstad.

Still, despite her many irritations with the Sisters of Ceres, it was there that she had learned about the geography of Vatan. Across the Iceflow River which was the Westmarch’s eastern border lay the rest of Taladaria, the first fief you encountered to the south east was the Barony of Sheffield. To the north east was the County of Verdon which bordered a small stretch of the Westmarch across the river. The western bank of the river was very marshy there making it very difficult to get directly from the Westmarch to Verdon. Other than a few trappers, not many people lived in that part of Verdon as it was almost always damp and misty. Large sections flooded every year and the only settlement of note was a place called Landing, a community of wooden buildings on stilts where trappers came to trade their wares and rest. It was mostly empty during the winter months.

Oakharrow County lay to the North, though there wasn’t a clearly defined natural border there. There was a line of low hills, but it lacked clear demarcation compared to the Iceflow river in the East. For a long time, contact between Thetwick and Oakharrow had been regular and generally amicable, with people frequently visiting each other’s markets and occasional marriages between the fiefs. The ground in Oakharrow was rocky and hard, unsuitable for much more than sheep and goat herding, making it even poorer than Thetwick, especially since it had been independent for a long time. There was never an influx of gold like when the Duke had the meeting hall built in Thetwick or when he’d sent former cavalrymen to breed warhorses.

Ala had seen her share of armies march through the Westmarch as well as attacks by orcks from the South. The fortifications that the Westmarch had had in the distant past, most notably the tower where Ala liked to go and play had already been destroyed a long time before Ala arrived in Thetwick. Taladaria and Selinus seemed to violently disagree about things quite regularly. During her life the Duke’s men had come to deal with incidents with Oakharrow and Selinus, as well as the intermittent bands of orcks coming down from the southern mountains. It didn’t happen often and normally they didn’t get very far but Ala would never forget the great orck horde that came down from the mountains in 861. Everything had been topsy-turvy for almost a year and when they returned after having had to flee Thetwick, it took a long time for the town to recover.

Incursions from Selinus had been something that would happen several times a year for in some periods, then nothing might happen for a decade or more. Sometimes it was a cattle raid and sometimes Selinan nobles decided to plunder a hamlet and once even Thetwick itself had been raided. It was during that raid that Ala’s human twelve year old sister Emma had been abducted. It had been a great shock for everybody in Palady’s family. Emma had been taken by a group of mounted warriors, black knights from Selinus. Ala had only been in Thetwick for about a decade then. Such raids were a part of life in the Westmarch, but even though that was dramatic and shocking, for the most part Thetwick was peaceful during Ala’s time there. Relations with Oakharrow did noticeably deteriorate after King Justus was crowned in Selinus and interaction between Oakharrow and the Westmarch decreased after that. In later years Ala came to understand that the frequency of the raids tended to be related to the presence of young nobles in the regions closest to the Westmarch, mainly the Barony of Greythorn. Abduction, for the purpose of indentured servitude was a disgusting sport for the Selinan nobility. It was also Emma’s probable fate.

For the most part, the people of Thetwick had little to do with the outside world. News from other lands was scarce as travelers from far away were rare. Any news from lands beyond Taladaria or Selinus seldom made it to Thetick. Ala heard the news of a Duke’s passing in the year 920 when she’d been in Thetwick about eighty years. She didn’t really understand its significance at the time. To her, the fact that the old Duke had died and a new Duke, Ivan the Second, had inherited, didn’t change anything for her daily life. As far as she could tell it didn’t really change anything in Thetwick either. She didn’t understand why it was the talk of the town for several weeks. It wasn’t until much later that she realised that the building of the new town hall and the assigning of a permanent Constable a few years after the inheritance was an example of the new Duke setting his house in order and bolstering his Western defences.

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The Half Elven Orphan #6

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Palady’s Passing

Ala had been in Thetwick for almost seventy years, as close as she could reckon it, when Palady passed away. It was early in the spring of the year 916, with snow still on the ground in many places, following a winter that had been unusually cold. There was only the slightest inkling of spring in the air and the lack of new life felt like an approprate backdrop for her funeral.

Ala was very sad, Palady had been her one constant during all her time in Thetwick, which almost felt like it was all she had ever known. Palady had lived a very long life for a human, outliving both her human daughter, Olivia and her granddaughter Amelia. No one had ever found out what had become of her other daughter Emma after her abduction by Selinan raiders. Amelia had died in childbirth, giving birth to Aubree, Palady’s youngest great grandchild. Palady’s long life was something Ala knew she should feel grateful for but she still felt very alone without the old lady. Aubree had been raised by Palady and Ala after Amelia and Olivia’s deaths. By then Palady had already been quite old, so Ala had played an important role in Aubree’s upbringing. It was Aubree who came to Ala’s rescue when Ala couldn’t stay in Palady’s house any longer.

The house Palady had lived in had been rented from one of the richer families in Thetwick, relatives of Palady’s deceased husband Jack. It was generations later though and no vestiges of a family relationship would allow Ala to live there for free. Ala had no income and she looked like a slight human girl not quite in her early teens, aside from the pointed ears that she always kept hidden under her long hair, a headscarf or a hooded cloak. In addition, women weren’t officially allowed to enter into contracts in the Westmarch or even anywhere in Iurrak, unless they were widowed. That wasn’t to say that Ala hadn’t seen it happen over the years, but the age humans perceived her to be and the fact that she was a half elf meant that such an arrangement wasn’t a possibility for Ala. Aubree’s offer to take her in was a great relief. Ala hadn’t really known what else to do and she had even seriously been considering leaving to live in the forest somewhere.

Aubree’s husband, Alexander, had died very shortly after she had married, even before they’d had any children. Aubree had always been close to Ala, even more so after her husband died. Having been mostly raised by Ala, there weren’t many secrets between the two of them. At Palady’s funeral, Aubree suggested that Ala should live with her. It was a little awkward at first of course. The two knew each other well, but Aubree was twenty three and used to running her own little household. Ala had hardly changed in twenty three years, being much like a young teen-aged human child that whole time. She was also used to taking care of everything for Palady. She and Aubree took a while to adjust, to balance their house together but they did find a way to comfortably complement each other after a time. Every so often, the fact that Ala wasn’t human would come up.

“You know Ala, it’s so hard to imagine that you’re probably even older than Palady was,” Aubree said thoughtfully once, when the were sitting together by the fire on a rainy night.

“I’m not completely sure that I am. But… you’re right… it has to be something like that.”

“Such a strange thing. I… well… humans I guess… we all think highly of a long life. But when it’s as long as yours. I see how hard it is for you to fit in among the rest of us.”

“It… well, sometimes it’s a bit unpleasant. Though it has its upsides, too.”

“I suppose. Well at this rate, I’ll be an old woman before you’re even marriageable. I think I would have liked to see that.”

“Marriage? No thanks.”

“Trust you to say that. Well, we’ll see. You’re so… timeless, I can’t really imagine it either. Sometimes it makes me feel weird.”

“I’m sorry.”

“It’s not you fault. Probably because we Thets don’t get around much. I mean, you’re hardly the only half-elf in Taladaria, I’d think. Just, we’re not used to it out here in the Westmarch.”

Every few years they had a comparable conversation. It was really the only time Ala’s different nature ever came up. When they were out, Ala was treated like Aubree’s child sister and Ala played along, but the relationship was somewhere between equal and the other way round. Ala had picked the minds of anyone who was willing to talk to her for decades, after all and she knew an awful lot compared to almost everyone in Thetwick. She also knew the school’s whole curriculum better than the Sisters of Ceres themselves. Ala’s comparatively endless knowledge and skills were something Aubree had grown up with, so it didn’t unnerve her like it tended to do with the other villagers.

In fact, Aubree looked up to Ala. Ala loved Aubree and accepted the strange way her human relationships changed during her slow life. It wasn’t as if she had any real choice. Ala continually watched the lives of all the villagers passing her by. As she grew older and her body developed boys started to show an interest in her. She noticed them, of course. She didn’t find the attention unpleasant, but none of the boys in the village interested her. She had been around long enough to know exactly what boys of that age were driven by. Not that she didn’t have similar urges, she just wasn’t quite ruled by them. The boys were all so… small-minded. Even the human girls thought the boys were immature, so it made sense to her that she wasn’t interested in them, since she had been around so much longer than everyone else.

Young boys, especially younger brothers without any inheritance, were still regularly sent to join the Duke’s regiment. As Thetwick’s population grew, so did the number of children and also the number of boys who were sent to serve the Duke. Eldest sons inherited, girls grew up and had husbands and children. There were tragedies, small and big and sometimes violence. There was even a murder every decade or so. A man was caught and hanged in front of the whole town, once, for banditry along the road to the Ford Inn. It had been quite gruesome, making Ala feel queasy. Once, they even had to flee Thetwick, going north towards Oakharrow when a horde of Orcks came out of the southern mountains. The orcks were eventually driven back by the Duke’s regiment and the Levy, but several buildings in Thetwick were damaged or burned. Many men who had been in the levy had been killed. When they were able to return, signs of battle were still fresh, with defensive berms and stakes still visible all the way around the town.

Thetwick had good times and bad times during the years that Ala lived there. At times it had swelled to the size of a modest town while after the orck attacks in 861 and 926 it had taken years to recover, though the former attack, known as ‘The Great Horde’ had been the worst by far. Most of the town was built out of wood, which easily disappeared, or so it seemed to Ala who had been in Thetwick longer than many of the houses. A lot of houses had been destroyed during the orck attacks too.

Ever so slowly more stone buildings and even some fortifications were raised. They were built out of stone quarried a few miles upstream of the town. There was no wall around the town, but some of the richer families started building stronger houses as the years passed. Some more affluent inhabitants rebuilt parts of their house in stone as Thetwick became wealthier, for protection and durability. In the year 927 a grand building was erected by men sent by the Duke. Ala thought it was both a reaction to the Orck Incursion the year before and an effort to help Thetwick recover from the damage.

The meeting hall was was the largest and strongest building Thetwick had seen in living memory. It had strong walls, arrow slits and even a modest square tower, with crenellations around a pointed roof on top. Its building had been supervised by several the Duke’s men who had come all the way from Peyrepertuse to oversee the construction. One of them had been a master mason and he directed the building of the hall. It was a place for meetings, courts, festivals and a base for the levy. Outside the hall, a large area was marked out for the Duke’s use. It was the drilling field, where the levy was to meet and practice their skills. It was a square of a hundred by a hundred royal yards, surrounded by a row of solid oak trees that were planted around its perimeter. Even they seemed to grow faster than Ala did. From then on, the town had a Constable too, who customarily was elected by the council of elders to take care of the Duke’s and the towns’ affairs. The Constable also was the Lieutenant of the Levy and was in charge of drilling and leading the militia when it was needed. Ala almost never saw a Lieutenant actually practising with the militia, it was a part of the job that no one seemed to take very seriously.
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Life was frustrating for Ala at times. Even when Palady had been alive everyone in the family had understood that emphasising Ala’s longevity among the people of Thetwick would make life harder. There was a lot of superstition and it was better not to give people cause to think about Ala as if she were something other than human. When Ala had moved in with Aubree they had also agreed that it was best if most townspeople didn’t think about Ala at all. The majority of the people of Thetwick knew of her presence, but they seemed to be prepared to ignore it as long as she stayed on the periphery of society. Partly because of that, Ala had always spent a lot of time out and about, ranging around the countryside. She was particularly good at finding edible mushrooms, far more than they could eat. She usually traded most of them for other foods. Mostly she was alone because it was so hard to find companions who didn’t eventually grow uncomfortable with her. Humans expected her to be friends with children who looked like they were in the same age bracket. As Ala was vastly older than those human children that didn’t work very well. On the other hand, older humans tended to treat her like a child, which Ala didn’t like either. Every so often Ala found someone she was friendly with for a while, but it never seemed to take long for the differences in the rates that they aged to come between them, or, as also happened frequently, for the friend in question to be forbidden to speak to her because she was a half elf.

She did make the acquaintance of some of the hunters, offering to help them in exchange for things like an occasional hide or some meat. This was a partnership that worked well as it required little talking and was always focused on the task at hand. Most of the professional hunters tended to be a kind of loners too. Hunting was a profession for those who preferred to be out in nature, left to their own devices. She learned many things from them, things like how to set snares, skinning rabbits, boars and deer, cooking over a fire and how to hunt with a bow and fend for herself. The hunters were used to working alone and it was easier to talk with them individually than when she was in the town. That seemed to apply at least as long as the subject was related to hunting. She learned a little fletching from them too, enough to make herself a serviceable hunting bow.

She did grow, ever so slowly, slowly developing into a beautiful young girl, seemingly in her teens. She had continued to dye her hair a mousy brown colour just as Palady had always insisted she do. It had actually taken decades before Ala really knew what her real hair colour was.

“Ala, your roots are showing again,” said Aubree one afternoon.

“Already?” Ala sighed.

“You could just… you know… not dye it? Your natural colour is so wonderful.”

“No, I promised Palady.”

“I know. Well, I think we still have everything we need to make more dye from the last batch. I’ll mix some up for you. You might need to bring back some nettles with you from the forest, we’re probably going to need more of those.”

“I will.”

Palady had made her promise to keep it brown after she died, which she dutifully did as often as she remembered to.

Ala’s favourite job was helping the many horse breeders of Thetwick. Not many of them would tolerate her around their farms at first, but there had been a few since she’d started looking like she was in her teens that hadn’t turned away her help with grooming and walking the horses. At one of the farms, the owner saw her whisper a huge unruly breeding stallion that no one else dared approach to calmness and that was all that was needed for her to be given more substantial jobs. Eventually, word got around that she had a knack for horses. Ala knew that the Duke had given a number of his Regiment’s former cavalrymen a grant of land in Thetwick, as well as a contract to supply warhorses. It had developed into Thetwick’s most important source of income from outside the county. Thetwick had become famous for its horses in the decades that Ala lived there. Even the Duke of Taladaria himself was said to ride Thetwick bred destriers, a fact the villagers were all very proud of.

Ala just liked the fact that the horses didn’t judge her. The majestic creatures always seemed to really like her, especially when she spoke to them in elven. The only thing that fascinated her more than horses was swords and swordplay, though there was no way for a young girl in Thetwick to do more than watch the levy on those rare occasions when it was called out to practice. When they did, something in the back of her mind told her that they didn’t really know what they were doing, though she never said anything. Sometimes some young men would start a group for weapons practice, but that usually didn’t last for long either. She had tried to join in when boys were playing with wooden swords many times but she had always been turned away, sometimes violently. In the rural culture of Thetwick, a sword wielding girl was unimaginable.

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The Half Elven Orphan #5

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Keeping Count

She had been in Thetwick for more than forty years since the day she had decided it would be a good idea to start keeping count. It was then that she had started keeping track of dates too and she made it a point to remember that that year had been 855 by the way the humans of Iurrak customarily counted them. She’d since learned that in Selinus they sometimes used the years of a monarch’s reign, or the elven calendar that she’d heard went back far further. She didn’t really know how either of those worked though. She wasn’t certain how long she had been in Thetwick before 855, but it couldn’t have been more than a decade or two, she thought. She remembered that the village had been little more than a hamlet when she first came to it, it had grown a lot since. She also still didn’t know how old she was, but it was much, much older than the ten human years or so that she now looked. Too many people lived in Thetwick now, but she didn’t think there were more than a handful who were older than her and they were the most ancient people in the town.

She still only had vague memories of the time before her adoptive mother, Palady, had taken her in. They were partial and dreamlike, all of beautiful, tall and slender people, musical voices and white stone cities among enormous trees. The city or cities she remembered had been filled with enormous, airy buildings and magnificent towers reaching into the sky, with the wind making nice strange noises as it found its way around the tall structures. There were figures in her memories who she thought might be her mother and father, but she hardly had more than shards of images. She remembered that there had been plants, coaxed to grow around white stone and the sound of many birds. She also remembered strange and beautiful creatures in a magnificent forest somewhere. There might have been less buildings there, but she wasn’t sure. It had smelt of spring and life. The only other thing she was really certain of was that she must have come to Thetwick after she learned to talk, since she could speak and even read, elvish, a skill which no else in Thetwick seemed to possess.

A fair number of people in Thetwick could read, which they usually learned at school. Her command of elvish puzzled her a little though. She assumed that learning to read elven must have been with her elven parent, though she didn’t even know if it was her mother or father who had been an elf. The way she learned wasn’t exactly like human children. She realised it was very uncommon for a human child who was the same size as she had been when she’d arrived in Thetwick to have already learned to read. She guessed she must have been the size of a four or five year old human child, then but she thought she might have already even been decades old, even then.

She thought that simply having more time was what made the difference, rather than learning to read being too difficult for a four or five year old human child. It was just that humans were a few years older when they mastered it, just because it took a few years to master. Even if Ala had learned when she was even smaller and it had taken her five years, she would still have looked like a four or a five year old human child by the team she’d spent far more hours learning than a human child had by the time they were eight. It seemed logical to her that she could have learned to read elvish even though she still would have looked quite a lot younger than even the youngest of literate human children.

She didn’t know how old she had been when she arrived and even Palady had never really dared to make a proper guess. Palady described it as if she had been about the size of a human four or five year old as well, anyway. What that meant in half-elf years she simply didn’t know, but she decided it must have been decades. Of course she wasn’t actually sure her rate of ageing was constant. It was quite difficult to make any guesses without anyone knowledgeable to ask.

When Palady was already very old, she had sat Ala down and explained to her in more detail about the group of the Duke’s soldiers that had left Alagariel in Thetwick. They had rescued Ala somewhere, Palady didn’t know exactly where, but she thought it might have been near a small fief to the West, named Seraphim. She told her again about the senior guardsman with the patrol, William the Bull. Mostly, Ala knew the story and even thought she remembered shards of those days which were filled with terror. Palady also told her how she had chosen the name ‘Alagariel’ for her. As a little girl she had only referred to herself as ‘Ala’. It was one of the few things she had ever said during the first few years in Thetwick. Palady thought it was probably part of a longer name, shortened to make it easier for a child to say. Trying to imagine a longer form of Ala, the name Alagariel, who was an elf queen in a popular faery tale, had seemed fitting. Her name was usually followed by her saying things in elven that Palady obviously couldn’t understand. There had been improvement though and eventually, Ala had started speaking the common tongue too.

The name Palady had chosen, was very well known name among the people of the Westmarch owing to the popular tale. It wasn’t customary to name girls ‘Alagariel’, but everyone knew it well nonetheless. Children all across Taldyr learned the nursery rhyme. It had been Palady’s favourite story when she was a girl herself. It was about an elven queen and her dragon friends who had driven the demons from the world together at the beginning of time. Palady had learned the story from her grandmother. Alagariel knew it was a common story that was always told to awe young children. The Alagariel in the story was strong and smart, a warrior, a fire sorceress and a stern though fair Queen. She was presented as someone who would come to save you if you were good. Ala loved stories, though if she was honest her favourite was a different tale, one about a Northern shieldmaiden named Kára. Still, she understood that Palady had chosen the name for her because she was a half-elf and she had found it fitting for a child who called herself ‘Ala’.

Ala was sure she had had a different name before she came to Thetwick… she was sure it hadn’t been Alagariel but she just couldn’t remember it. Once she realised that her new name was different she had spent a lot of time trying to remember what the old one was. Sometimes she thought she had it but eventually she realised she just couldn’t be sure. It was a lot longer than ‘Ala’, that was the only thing she was certain about.

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The Half Elven Orphan #4

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Palady Explains

Once, when she had been in Thetwick for some time, Palady had sat her down and explained things to her.

“Now Ala, I think you’re old enough that we should have a little talk about you and where you come from.”

“Old enough?”

“Well, I admit that I don’t know how old you are, but you certainly look like you’re around six years old or so.”

“We have to talk about me because I look like I’m six…?”

“Like a six year old human, yes. You get older very slowly, I’ve explained before that that’s because you’re a half-elf, right?”

“I know, Palady. You’ve told me many times. You tell me… most days.”

“Good. What I haven’t told you about is how you came to be in Thetwick. At least not in any detail.”

“I think… I was brought… by soldiers?” Ala said, feeling a stirring of memories.

“That’s right. About twenty years ago now, when my Jack was still alive and Emma was still with us.”

Ala grew quiet. It always made her sad when she thought of Emma. Emma was… or had been one of her two human sisters, the younger of the two. The girl had been abducted by raiders from Selinus, she knew. She’d really loved Emma. She didn’t know where Selinus was, but she knew Emma hadn’t been the only one taken that day. Other villages had also been dragged away by the Selinan men. Palady had explained that it was something terrible that sometimes happened in the Westmarch. It was very rare that they ever dared to ride all the way to Thetwick itself. The last time, before the day Emma had been taken, had been years before Ala arrived in the village. Some of the hamlets further north had to contend with raids more often, Palady had told her. The Selinans came to steal cattle, horses and sometimes, like on that day, even people.

“I still miss Emma too,” Palady comforted her, stroking her hair. “As well as Jack. It’s quite normal to think of her. Let’s hope she’s safe, at least, shall we?”

Ala could see older woman’s eyes reddening at the thought. Palady quickly pulled herself together and continued.

“But today we need to talk about something else, alright? We can’t think of the people we’ve lost and loved all the time, even though we sometimes want to, can we?”

“I guess not,” she said, though she was wondering if they did it too little.

“So now I’m going to talk to you about how you came to Thetwick.”

“OK.”

“The soldiers that brought you were led by a warrior, William the Bull. A proud and honourable man, he was. A hero. William was Jack’s half brother.”

“Really?”

“Yes, it’s true. He was a good man, it’s said that the Duke even commended him personally many times. He was one of the Duke’s best soldiers. Anyway, William and his soldiers happened upon some enemy soldiers, humans and even some other creatures. William thought they were probably returning from an ambush…”

“An ambush?”

“Yes, that’s a place where travellers had been attacked and hurt by orcks and nasty creatures. He and his soldiers stumbled upon them by accident, William said.”

“What happened then?”

“They managed to chase off the bad creatures and men. They didn’t have time to look where exactly the ambush had happened, even though they could tell from the things that the bad creatures were carrying that it couldn’t have been far away. They looked around, but couldn’t find any other survivors.”

“I was really the only one?” She asked, hoping, though she really knew the answer.

“I’m sorry Ala. I don’t know if your real mother and father were among the casualties, but I’m afraid… I think they might have been. It’s more than likely, I’m sorry.”

“I know, Palady,” said Ala seriously. Thinking about it made her feel empty inside.

“Of course you do. Yo know so many things for such a little girl. Now let me continue the story. The soldiers found you, tied up, slung over a horse. You were a prisoner, so the soldiers freed you and took you with them. Apparently you tried to run away several times. William didn’t really know what to do with you, so I said it was alright if you stayed with me. I promised to look after you.”

“You look after me very well, Palady.”

That caused the woman to smile. “Why thank you, Ala. That’s kind of you to say. But, I think we both know you mostly look after yourself, don’t you? Sometimes you are even the one looking after the rest of us.”

It was partially true. She often took home what she found in the forest often bringing home many mushrooms, berries, wild plants and roots that they could eat. She liked to cook and often did help with the many things that were needed to keep the household running. She really did feel that Palady looked after her very well though.

Ala’s other, older, human sister, Olivia, was already married by then. She had a daughter of her own, named Amelia. Ala often looked after Amelia. Ala was so much older than she looked so that everyone in Palady’s family knew looking after Olivia’s daughter could easily be left to her. It was strange to some of the neighbours to see Ala and Amelia alone together when they were roughly the same size. Thirty years later, Amelia died in childbirth, greatly saddening Ala. After that, she also looked after Amelia’s two older children, Garrett and Aubree, very often.

Ala didn’t know any other half-elves and neither did anyone else in the town. She hadn’t been able to find anyone else who knew any, at least. A half-elf would live a lot longer than other people, Palady had told her, that’s why it made sense that she grew slower. She ached to know how much longer it would take and no one in Thetwick that she’d dared ask had been able to tell her anything useful. No one seemed to know how much longer it took a half-elf to grow up and the answers she’d had had been so different from one another that they were of no use at all.

Palady, her adoptive mother, whom she loved dearly had gotten very old before Alagariel had even developed breasts. That certainly wasn’t the way things worked for humans, she knew. She sometimes cursed her heritage because it put her so far outside the human world. She didn’t fit in with the other children of the village and she didn’t fit in with the adults, so she spent a lot of time on her own. Palady had always tried to hide the fact that Ala was a half elf. She kept Ala’s hair dyed brown and made her wear a headscarf or a hood and sometimes even both to hide her pointed ears. She made Ala arrange her hair so that even if the hood came off, her ears wouldn’t be clearly visible. It wasn’t that her being a half-elf was really a secret. Palady had tried to explain that it would just be safer for Ala if the villagers weren’t constantly reminded that Ala was different.

She often said, “not all folks are as open-minded as me, Ala, best be careful.”

Ala made sure to pay heed to her advice, Palady’s point had been made painfully clear so many times that it was impossible for her to forget about it. She had made a few friends over the years, but many of the villagers kept their children away from her. Those few friends she had made tended to drift away as the discrepancy in ageing made things strange for them. She seemed to lose the connection with them, somehow, when they grew up. The people around Thetwick were used to how she looked, with most knowing about her pointed ears, very pale blue eyes and her skin, which had a slight reddish-gold tinge. Ala didn’t think anyone knew that her hair wasn’t really mousy brown. Even so the villagers still mostly ignored her as they would most children even though she was usually far older than both the children and their parents. She was often even older than their grandparents, which she sometimes even forgot herself.

The Half-Elven Orphan #3

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Thetwick

The village she lived in was called Thetwick. It was the only settlement of note in the Westmarch, a thinly populated area mostly covered in trees and bushes, at least to the north of the village. The trees were thickest in the southern part of the March, with large stretches of proper forest and hills that grew bigger the closer you got to the Irin Mountains that made the natural Southern border of the March. In the North, the hills were a little lower and the vegetation wasn’t as thick.

Thetwick was more or less in the middle of the March, next to a river, the Clearflow, that was navigable up to Thetwick for small boats a few months most years. It was a logical place to put goods ashore and she had heard that it had used to be a busier route once, long before Ala came to Thetwick. The river was fordable at the upstream end of Thetwick and the road had once forked to the North to Oaktown and West to Seraphim from there. There was still a weathered stone marker near the town square which indicated the distance to both places. Both roads were barely dirt tracks anymore and had mostly been reclaimed by nature.

When Ala arrived, Thetwick housed no more than thirty families but it steadily grew during the years she lived there. Her mother had told her that Thetwick had grown and shrunk many times in the past and that it was growing again because the Duke was giving free land to those willing to move there. From the point of view of a trader or traveller, the Westmarch was a dead end on the western border of Iurrak. Even if you wanted to travel on the West or North from Thetwick, the journey was hard and often impossible with any kind of cart or wagon.

For Ala, there wasn’t much else she could do except go to school. As she got older she mostly helped her mother’s with chores and anything she could do to contribute to the welfare of the household.. Sometimes there was work she could do, like out in the fields during the harvest. Everyone was needed then, even people as small as half elf children. She liked being out, in the wilderness, particularly in the forests to the south. She never felt quite at ease in town. Most of the humans treated her much the way they treated young human children, which meant that she was largely ignored. Ala sort of understood why. She was the only half-elf in the village and she was probably also the only half- elf that most of them had ever seen. She didn’t like it though. She was decades older than the other children… older than most of the adults too. She had learned that most humans didn’t like it when she pointed that out. She’d had time to learn all the basic things humans were taught as they grew up several times over but no one other than her mother and siblings ever really acknowledged that her long life might make any difference. Even they mostly acted like she was a human child.

When she wanted to be alone, she snuck away to the ruined tower near the town. In the beginning it had been quite a long walk and she could only go when the grown ups were very busy with other things. When she was a little older she would run all the way. It was her favourite spot. She would tell herself all the elvish stories that she knew in her head. Sometimes she would sit down an recite her tales to the animals. Many of them seemed to like that and she could just sit there feeding animals out of her hand. She also spent a lot of time wandering around the nearby forest whenever she could slip away. Sometimes she would look for edible things, like berries and nuts, mushrooms or roots. She didn’t know why she liked the forest so much, it just felt a little bit like home. She wondered if it was just that all forests smelled alike. Would she feel this way in every forest? She was quite good at foraging food and useful materials from the forest and she always made sure to take things home with her that made life a little easier and food a little more abundant.

She wasn’t exactly sure when or where she had learned so many elvish stories or how she knew which plants tasted good and which ones were safe to eat. She could recite many stories from memory and often did, when she was at the ruins alone. She never got sick from the things she ate and sometimes she thought she vaguely remembered a beautiful woman with coppery skin who had taught her which plants to choose and how to tell apart those that were very similar but poisonous. It always left her wondering if she was making it all up? Was it because she wished she knew her mother, or did that coppery skinned woman actually exist?

Sometimes she’d make a little fire. One of the first times she did so, she realised for the first time that the flames did as she asked, easily appearing or disappearing, growing hotter or colder, or bigger or smaller. The effect was mesmerising and she couldn’t stop herself from coaxing the flames to follow her will for hours. Eventually she managed to put the fire out, realising that she would only make it home after dark. Even then, she was hesitant. She knew that wasn’t completely normal to be able to make fire do your bidding and it worried her. She had heard about witches, about how they were bad and what people did to them. She immediately decided it would be safest hide her new found ability completely and never use it again. It was hard though, because using it, feeling the energy flowing through her felt good and exciting. She was too fascinated to stop trying things with her new discovery and tried more and more things whenever she felt she’d been able to check that she was truly alone.

Before long, she didn’t even need kindling. She settled on not telling another living soul about it, not ever. As long as she kept it just to herself and only practised where she was sure she wouldn’t be seen, people wouldn’t do the horrible things to her that were done to magicians, she reasoned. Even in Thetwick, women had been burned at the stake for being witches, the last one, a midwife, had been burned a short while before Ala had arrived in the village. She didn’t think that she could really be counted as a magician, but she wasn’t sure the villagers would believe her if she conjured fire out of thin air. It did feel good though, calling her ’little trick’, as she thought of it. She used it whenever she made her fires, but only when she’d made completely sure she was alone. Every now and again, she’d forget the time, scaring her mother when she came back after dark. She did always try to be on time, because she could see how much it worried the sweet woman if she was out at night.

Because the other children grew quicker than she did, she had been forced to learn to defend herself. In each generation of chil dren, there were always a few bullies. She was very small and she watched other children grow right past her every year. A boy named Edgar Marchmain relished tormenting whoever and what- ever he could. She once found him tormenting a cat, tying things to its tail. She pulled a useful looking hazel branch off a bush and brandished it.

“Stop that! Take that off her tail!” She screamed at him. “Right now!” He glanced at her, putting on an air of disinterest. It was probably for the benefit of his audience, a small group of slightly younger boys whose job it was to assist him in his torments as well as cheer him on.
“Buzz off, stinking half-elf, or I’ll tie them to you!” He said, laughing out loud with his friends.
Ala stomped towards him, though she was a head shorter. He hadn’t expected it so he stumbled unsteadily to his feet, raising his hand to strike her. She was quicker though, whipping him across the face with all her might with the branch, causing him to fall down with a yelp of pain, clutching his temple. His friends were as surprised as Edgar was, but one of them reacted as she was about to bend down to free the cat. “Get her!” There were three of them, all bigger and heavier, but she sensed they felt uncertain. Edgar was still on the ground holding his bleeding brow and whimpering. She knew she probably wasn’t going to win against them in a fair fight, so she turned towards the first one, who had yelled and wanted to grab her. She feinted with her branch and then kicked him in the shin as hard as she could, producing a satisfying yelp. With him in the way of the other two, she kicked the other shin for good measure, which caused him to bend forward and squeal even harder. Next, with his head now in a good position to hit it, she took the opportunity to punch him in the face, feeling with satisfaction how his lip burst against his lower teeth. She then turned and started running. With two of them out of the fight, the last two only made a token effort to pursue her. She went back to find the cat as soon as she dared, but the animal had managed to extricate itself out of its predicament by the time she got to it.

Edgar had a scar over his eye for the rest of his life. Her mother really couldn’t get out of punishing her for that and she had a sore bottom and back for several days. She knew her mother didn’t really disapprove of her saving the cat and no one really believed that she’d beaten both boys to a pulp, but coming home with the offending hazel branch still in her possession meant that she wasn’t really able to deny that part of the incident when her mother questioned her.

She learned how to use her size and speed and she found she had an infinitely deep well of brutality to call on when bigger children tried to bully her. She might be smaller, but she was older, meaner when needed and had more experience. Also, because she grew so much more slowly it was like her body was less unwieldy than the rapidly growing human children. It was always like they were still trying to get their constantly changing bodies under control. Bullies usually only made a single attempt before figuring out she wasn’t an easy target. Her reactions were brutal and she wasn’t scared to really hurt someone if cornered. She usually had them running for home, crying, in seconds.

Once she even knocked a tooth out of a boy much bigger than her. The grown ups didn’t even believe him when he claimed that such a small girl had done it. Ala felt he had deserved it, he’d been tormenting insects, pulling out legs and wings. She had warned him to stop once, but it was years after the Marchmain incident, so he made the mistake of ignoring and insulting her instead. She’d pretended to leave, walking by him and then threw herself on the back of the boy’s head as he was bent over the insects he was torturing. She’d used her entire weight, little as it was, to smash his face into the stone he’d been using as a torture chamber. She got away with it that time, since no one believed the boy when he claimed she’d done what she had.

Even though she had no particular qualms about violently defending herself or others, ageing so slowly that her childhood encompassed many generations of human children meant she periodically had to reestablish her reputation as a dangerous adversary. It also didn’t always work and she got a lot more practice defending herself and running away than she would have liked. Every generation there were a few children who thought they could get the better of her and every time she had to make it clear that they weren’t going to manage. She preferred to do so in such a way that they didn’t try again and got quite good at escalating to a unreasonbly harsh reaction before her assailants realised their mistake.

Her mother thought she should visit the school as much as possible, but relented eventually when she realised there wasn’t anything left there for Alagariel to learn. It became too awkward. Alagariel was still about the size of many of the human children that started school when she’d completed the entire curriculum several times. Most of her classmates from years before had al- ready married and had children. That was strange, mostly for those class mates. By then Ala had already long gotten used to the lives of humans passing her by. She’d had a lot more time to grow used to being different than the humans around her ever got, so she could understand why it was difficult for the humans. Even so, she didn’t like losing friends just because they turned into grown ups while she stayed childlike.

Sometimes her former classmates moved away. Quite a few boys, particularly younger sons, left to join the Duke’s regiment when they were twelve or thirteen. A few of them left with a caravan almost every spring. It was a bit of an event each time, with their families seeing them off. Their siblings often cried and sometimes even their parents. Most that left, if they came back at all, only did so many years later. She’d heard that quite a few boys died while they were soldiers for the Duke too. Such events were important news in town and were always accompanied by an official scroll with the sad news being handed to the town scribe by a visiting caravan master. Very occasionally, a man came back to the Westmarch after thirty five years of service in the Regiment, with a grant of land from the Duke in his pocket. This sometimes caused problems since the best land close to Thetwick was often already occupied by farmers who had no official rights to it.

The girls often married into a different town or one of the few small hamlets that dotted the Westmarch. Some even left the Westmarch altogether, though it was rare for anyone to travel further than Sheffield, the first Barony in Taladaria to the east. The way humans customarily lived their lives emphasised how Alagariel was different. She sometimes wished she’d been born human. At the same time she knew she wouldn’t really fit in to a life like that. The woman she lived with, Palady, wasn’t really her mother, of course. She knew she had been adopted. In her memories there were several tall and beautiful women, but she didn’t even know who was who. She wasn’t even completely sure that it wasn’t just wishful thinking, that she wanted there to be family in her memories. When she’d come to Thetwick, Palady had had two daughters of her own, Emma and Olivia, as well as her husband Jack. Jack had died young, which had made them all very sad. He’d been a gentle man, indulging his wife’s passion for taking in strays, both children and animals, without complaint. He’d always been friendly to Ala too, though he’d obviously seen her as different to his own children.

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The Half Elven Orphan #2

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Arrival

Alagariel sighed. She felt funny. Funny wasn’t the right word though. The right word, she decided, was different. She felt different. It didn’t help that her mother often pointed it out too.
“You’ll grow up slower than the other children, Ala. It’s because you’re a half elf.”
She knew that her mother didn’t say it out of malice. Her mother was a very good woman. It was just the way things were. Ala often wished she didn’t say it every day though. It was often frustrating enough without being reminded. The villagers reminded her too. Usually, it was the children.
“Ay, you! Ala! Don’t you ever… you know… grow?”
Things like that were usually followed by laughter. Some of the villagers also said that she was slow. Some of them tried to be nice about it, saying that it was understandable in a half-elf. She didn’t think they were right. The human children didn’t learn quicker than her. Not as far as she could tell. It was just because they grew so much faster than she did. To her it was like they never had time to know how old they were before they became even older. She often thought about things like that. She took more time to think about things than the other children, she supposed that at least was true. She was just less… hurried? She had time to be, before she rushed into being something else. It wasn’t like she was suddenly going to grow up like the other children did. Priestess Deirdre, who taught the village children, often scolded her.
“Stop daydreaming Alagariel!” she would say sharply, just as Ala was exploring a fascinating thought.
Ala didn’t really understand why Deirdre should care. She had heard all of the Priestesses’ lessons so many times. She might grow slower than the other children, but she was certainly a lot more sensible than any of the children who were about the same size. She had been in Thetwick for years before she had been allowed to go to school. It was actually a small wooden extension to the Temple of Ceres, not a proper building. It was quite new, having been built shortly before she arrived in Thetwick. She had been looking forward to going in the beginning. She didn’t always feel the same way now. It was usually very boring. Of course, she’d gone for far longer than any of the other children. Her mother and the priestesses seemed to be waiting for her to turn ten, though sanity finally prevailed when she’d actually visited the school for ten long years. She still looked the same as the other children on their first school day.

She didn’t actually know how old she was. By the end of her decade at school she’d been in Thetwick long before any of the other children in her class were born. She didn’t actually have to go to the school anymore after. It wasn’t mandatory at all and the Temple of Ceres only really intended for children to go there until they were ten. She was much older of course, being a half-elf. Even though Ala was sure she was much older, she was quite small, much smaller than most human children were when they were ten.
Over the years she spent at the school she had asked Priestess Deirdre just about everything the poor woman knew. In the beginning, the priestesses in charge of the school, particularly Deirdre,had been driven almost to desperation. Deirdre’s knowledge didn’t stretch very far and she didn’t like it when Alagariel asked her something she didn’t know a good answer to. Ala also seemed to remember things that had happened a long time ago better than the Priestess. It was something else that Ala knew Deirdre didn’t like to have pointed out so she’d stopped doing it. Deirdre learned how to deal with Ala more easily as she got older. Or perhaps it was just that Ala had stopped asking the priestess as many questions? Or maybe Deirdre had just stopped trying to force her to concentrate? It was probably a little of both. After that first seemingly endless decade, Ala visited the school again for a while every few years. The sisters of Ceres seemed not to mind, as long as she wasn’t disruptive. Deirdre not knowing something seemed to happen more and more often every time Ala went back to school, so she had begun asking other people about things too. Most people didn’t want to talk to her.
“Go away, half-elf! Don’t come near, hear me?” Was the sort of thing she often heard.
A lot of people didn’t like half-elves and the ones who didn’t care or know about her mixed heritage were rarely interested in a proper conversation with a child. Some people even seemed a little scared of her. She had to admit that the grown ups didn’t have a lot of time to spend on the human children either, but Ala was of the opinion that her questions were definitely better. It made her sad that the grown ups didn’t realise that, but it wasn’t surprising. Sometimes she found someone who was willing to talk to her and she occasionally found out something she didn’t know yet. She found she liked learning new things, especially if was about interesting subjects. She liked swords, though she didn’t really know why. Food, animals and the things that were happening in far away places were always exciting too. They were her favourite subjects. After swords, of course.

There came a time when Deirdre grew old and eventually died. While Ala had never really liked her very much, she found she was still sad when the priestess, who had become a quiet old lady by then, passed away. She ran into Deirdre, almost literally, once when she was on her way to school, not long before she died. Ala had been looking up, at a hawk circling high over the fields, when she’d almost walked into Deirdre who was sitting outside the temple in her chair with a blanket over her knees.
“Oh… sorry… sister Deirdre. I was just looking…”
“Oh Ala… you still haven’t changed a bit.”
“I do change a bit!”
“That’s not what I meant, I know full well you age slowly. What I mean is, that you’re still looking all over for new and 11interesting things.”
“Oh,” said Ala, feeling a little ashamed that she’d jumped to the wrong conclusion.
“What you’re talking about… well. I can still remember when you first came to my class. You do look a little different since then… but I wasn’t much more than a girl myself the first time you came to class. I’ve become a very old woman since then.”
Ala shuffled her feet. It was all true of course, but she thought she felt as strange about it as Deirdre did. It wasn’t happening to anyone else, after all.
“It’s odd for me too,” she whispered.
“Really? Or well… I suppose that makes sense. Though you must have a bit more time to get used to things. But, I suppose things are just as new for you as for me.”
“I guess.”
“Well Ala, it’s nice to talk to you, but you’d better run along, or you’ll be late, like you often were for my lessons.”
“OK. Bye… Sister Deirdre.”
“Oh and Ala?”
“Yes?”
“We don’t talk often and I won’t be around for all that much longer, so I should tell you now. I know we didn’t always get along very well, especially in the beginning, but I’m glad I met you. Really.”
Ala thought for a moment. “Me too, Sister Deirdre.”
“Ok, run along now.”
Ala ran off, though she slowed down to look back at the old lady for a moment too. She wondered if it was going to be the last time they spoke together. That idea saddened her. She was definitely going to be late.

Several new priestesses had come to Thetwick over the years and she’d was taught by many of them after Deirdre. Sometimes she had learned some new things from them, but priestess Deirdre was still the one who had taught her the most. One of the girls from the village, Gera, had even joined the Temple of Ceres. Her parents had been very proud, telling anyone who would listen that their daughter had been asked to travel to Pearson to join. They even told Ala. When Gera came back to Thetwick, to serve, she was eventually also allowed to teach. Ala avoided going to Gera’s lessons, she was more than certain that she knew everything Gera knew and more besides.

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The Half Elven Orphan #1

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Chapter 1: A Curious Foundling

An earnest footnote to the tale of Alagariel
by Ferdinand de Seyssel

Whether Alagariel Vatra is a historical figure or a mythical one is a matter of endless scholarly debate. Did she actually exist? It is impossible to determine with any degree of certainty. Elven historical works strongly imply that she was real. Even if one takes elven consensus at face value, the details of her tale vary dramatically even in elven histories. Every detail about her changes, depending on the telling. A great many names have been claimed to refer to her. Aside from the obvious ones such as ‘Alagariel Elf Queen’, ‘High Queen of the Elves’ and ‘Queen of Fire’ there are also monikers such as ‘Marshall of Vatan’, ‘Dragon Queen’, ‘Dragon Lady’, ‘Blade Mistress’, ‘Lady Fire’ and countless others that may or may not refer to the same person.

Elven scholars even go so far as to claim that some structures still existing today were called out of the ground by Alagariel’s own magic. Those who have sailed along the coast of Iurrak between Konigsberg and Erythrae have all seen one of the buildings attributed to Alagariel, namely the admittedly breathtaking Tower of Dragons. However, despite elven claims that she was primarily responsible for the magical construction of that magnificent edifice, this humble researcher has not managed to uncover any conclusive proof that this is, in fact, true.

Alagariel’s legend holds that she was responsible for driving demons from Vatan at the beginning of the elven calendar almost twenty thousand years ago. Of course, this is where things become truly impossible to verify. As little reliable information as there is to be found about Alagariel, material on her adversaries is even more scarce. In fact reliable documents describing events that occurred so long ago are essentially non-existent. No corroboration exists between the dating of Alagariel’s story and the architectural sites that are said to be associated with her reign. Certainly, the pristine condition of these buildings seems to make the claims unlikely even if they are said to be magical. Central to the many tellings of the Queen of Fire’s story is the recurring, rather fantastic, theme of her alliance with dragons and perhaps also giants. No reliable sightings of either of these species are known to exist.

Through these mists of uncertainly, all we can say for certain is that the nursery rhyme ’Alagariel’ which almost everyone in Taldyr and beyond has grown up with is at least inspired by her story, whether it really happened or not. Certainly, there are a great many elements which seem to be fanciful and while I do not mean to distress my elven colleagues it is perhaps best to see Alagariel’s tale as the distillation of a great many events and people in ancient history. We should see the tale in terms of metaphor and allegory rather than as a representation of an actual historical figure.

(From the works of his Royal Highness Ferdinand de Seyssel, Prince of Iurrak and Rector Magnificus of the University of Erythrae, in one of his countless contributions to the Encyclopedia Royalis Iurraka, circa 975.)

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The Half-Elven Orphan Starts October 3rd

The first book I will publish will be offered for free on this blog in weekly installments (59 of them at time of writing, which may change a little), starting on October 3rd at 1900hrs CEST. It is a fantasy novel set in the world of Vatan. It is the first book in the Alagariel series and the Tales of Vatan setting.

For future reference, the full title is The Half-Elven Orphan, Alagariel (Volume I), Tales of Vatan. I often struggle with figuring out read orders, so hopefully that helps a bit.

A few disclaimers:

  • There will be weekly installments, but I may choose to offer other work in the same time slot. So, it’s possible that in some weeks, I’ll put up something else on Thursday evening. It’s a highly likely that this book will eventually share its time slot with my first science fiction book “Dropship Down” set in the Total War setting. So it’s possible that it will take two years before the free versions of both books are fully published.
  • For the Half-Elven Orphan I will post a high resolution map of the area where most of the story is set. It will be released on the 9th of October 2024 in a seperate post.
  • The version on here is, initially at least, not the final print version. That said, it has been proof read by a group of people and generally received well enough that I’m comfortable posting it hear without its final edits. Besides final edits, I may still decide to change things too.
  • I may also post this to other online venues.
  • Obviously any and all support is appreciated. At the moment the only way that’s possible is via Patreon.

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