Christmas Excerpt Dropship Down

Chenkov Family Home
Berlin, Earth
2093.357 (Wednesday 23 Dec)

The only memorable event during the time at the administrative school near Magdeburg was joining Igor to visit his family in Berlin for Christmas. Laura had never experienced the holiday in the way the the Chenkovs celebrated it. Christmas had been a special occasion she was very young but it had never been an event the way it was for the Chenkov family. She remembered her mother had taken her ice skating one year when she was still doing alright, as well as some small gifts and a tiny fake tree with lights that changed colour.

The Chenkov Christmas experience was an eye opener. They arrived two days before Christmas. When they arrived, both Igor’s parents were waiting for them. His mother wore glasses, a long plaid skirt and knitted cardigan that fit very well with Laura’s idea of a typical female professor. His father was the same, with corduroy pants, a chequered shirt and a sleeveless vest as well as a small, slightly unkempt beard. Both were genuinely pleased to meet her. Igor had told her that both mother and father were academics, professors nearing the ends of their careers. They intended to move to Europa upon retirement.

Igor’s mother had already noticed her at HPBT graduation where they had exchanged polite nods. Igor had told his parents a lot about Laura and his mother, Ludmilla, clearly had high hopes for the relationship. She almost felt bad that she wasn’t romantically interested in Igor, it was such a warm and pleasant environment. Of course, she wasn’t really romantically interested in anyone and while she really liked Igor and wouldn’t have minded sleeping with him, she got the impression that he probably wouldn’t be able to adjust to that very well. She’d decided they were better off with a platonic friendship.

Igor’s family was well off and the way they lived was something Laura had never seen up close before. The house had a large tree, so big it seemed to reach almost to the apartment’s high ceilings. It was a real one decorated with lights and there were Christmas decorations, so many of them that it must have taken Igor’s mother weeks to prepare them. Igor’s parental home was in a large three storey building in the customary German urban style. It was a building with large rooms and high, decorated ceilings comprising six large apartments and a large garden surrounding all of it. It had high tall windows that let in a lot of light. Igor and his older brother, who now lived on the planet Europa with his family had each had their own rooms growing up. Igor’s brother’s room now functioned as a guest room for her. It was a warm, loving environment and there didn’t appear to be any significant family tragedies anywhere in sight. There were no jealous ex lovers or stoned acquaintances. It was all very… comfortable.

A completely irresponsible amount of food and drink was available with each meal melding seamlessly into the next. Igor had told her that his family were all atheists but it obviously hadn’t stopped them embracing Christmas when they moved to the EU. Igor, who had apparently made an exhaustive analysis explained that the way they celebrated it was a mix of many different cultures. From Russia his parents had brought traditions normally observed during the Russian Orthodox Easter. The CHenkovs had mixed in German customs and American commercialism and British roasts and mince pies. To Laura is seemed to be a case of ‘and’ rather than ‘or’, with each assimilated tradition contributing both to the amount of decorations and the volume of food. It was quite an expansive event.

“Is this how you normally celebrate?”

“Huh? Yeah. Of course. Used to be more family when I was younger. Lots of people are off world so it’s a small group these days really.”

When Christmas day finally came nd there were fifteen people there. It seemed awfully busy to Laura and she already felt like she didn’t need to eat for a month.

“So it’s always this big of an event?”

“I’m not that into it really Laura. I usually just come here and fill the time eating and drinking until I can go back to doing something useful. It’s always such an overload.”

With her family, she’d never really had enough Christmas to consider the possibility of a festive overload.

“Hmm. I guess… it could be a bit much. Especially the food.”

It definitely beat sitting alone at a deserted army base though. Igor had been right about that.

“My mother always gets really stressed making sure everything is in order. I can never really tell whether she likes it or just thinks it’s the way you’re expected to do it. She can be a little traditional.”

“Traditional? I see… what’s that Disney Rudolf the Reindeer? What about that? Is that like a Russian Orthodox icon or something?”

“I’ll concede that she seems undecided on which tradition is important, but you know what I mean.”

She’d never really realised how segregated people from places like La Tribune had become. The poverty really did affect everything. In La Tribune any gathering of this size had a good chance of becoming a drug or violence infested horror show.
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Igor had had to twist her arm to make her come, but in a rare moment of social insight, he had realised that she would be quite alone in a deserted barracks at Christmas if he didn’t take action. He hadn’t taken no for an answer.

“You’re not staying here alone Laura. This place will be deserted and depressing. I’m not having that on my conscience!”

“Look I’ll be fine. I’m sure I’ll find something to keep me occupied.”

“Look, I don’t want to have to talk exclusively to my parents for that long. They keep acting like I’m a bit of an idiot for getting conscripted.”

“What can I say, maybe they have a point?”

“Har, har. Very funny. Don’t try and change the subject!”

“Look, I’ll be fine here.”

“You stubborn idiot! You’re coming and that’s the end of it! Pack your bag or I’ll do it! I’ll drag you along by your hair if I have to.”

It had been an uncharacteristic outburst, such and unexpected thing for Igor to do that she’d agreed to come.

An empty military base is a bleak place at Christmas time, even if you don’t care for the holiday at all. Everything is deserted, most facilities are closed or running at minimal capacity and anyone who has duty is annoyed that they have to be there at all. Igor was right, she just felt really awkward about being at Igor’s home for a vacation.

Laura had never realised that such a thing as a functional family actually existed outside of fiction. It gave her something to think about, an option she had never considered before. She had even gone out into Berlin with Igor to get everyone presents. The shopping areas were insanely busy, but they managed to get everyone something vaguely festive. It was all an unfamiliar ritual to her, but she realised she should be very grateful to Igor for having taken her along. Even if some of it was awkward.

Influences: A.E. Van Vogt

In this case I’m mainly talking about the Null-A trilogy. This trilogy made the idea of General Semantics understandable, quite aside from being a wonderful read. A.E. Van Vogt has been criticised by reviewers, which seems to have marginalised to some extent. I’m not sure that those reviews were entirely fair, and in the balance of things I think he does belong among the great pioneers of Science Fiction among the ranks of Heinlein, Azimov and the other early greats.

At the very least, presenting General Semantics in an accessible way is a great achievement. I tried to read General Semantics by Korzybski itself, but it’s hell. I drowned in the introduction where Korzybski seems to take the time to explain why each an every person who ever sent him a letter disagreeing with his ideas is carefully counter argued. In any event, I don’t think a list of writers that influenced me could be complete without including the Null-A trilogy. I’ve read several of Van Vogt’s other books, but the Null-A series will always be the one that made the biggest impression on me.

Below is a link to the first book in the trilogy. Unfortunately the trilogy can be hard to find.

The World of Null-A

Progress Fall 2024

From time to time I intend to post progress on the many different projects I have. I tend to switch from one to the other when I’ve had enough of a certain setting for a while. Sometimes I want a break after a intense scene, sometimes I just need me some guns instead of swords for a bit.

As can be seen, my first two books are in the editing stage. It’s a process I’m struggling with, on the one hand because it’s a substantial investment and on the other, because I’m still looking for a line/copy editor that’s a good fit for me.

Tales of Vatan

TitleThenNow
A Path Less Traveled By (working title)38k45k
The Saga of Kára Ice-Eyes23k29k
Sunset91k112k
The Half Elven Orphan (Alagariel I) complete, editing140k160k
The Value of Nobility (Alagariel II), complete, draft
<classified> (Alagariel III), complete, draft
<classified> (Alagariel IV), planned, partial draft
<classified> (Alagariel V), planned, should conclude the 1st series
<classified> (Alagariel VI-X?) ideas and partial plans for a second series
<classified> (Alagariel XI+?) and another, probably concluding series that I have a solid outline for
Total words for all Alagariel series up to now (inc Alagariel I):643k
The Death Witch (working title)1k8k

Total War

TitleThenNow
Dropship Down (Clausewitz I) complete, editing140k?161k
A Nuclear Hello (Clausewitz II) complete, draft
The Long War (Clausewitz III) complete, draft (working title)
Headway at last (Clausewitch IV) was complete, but in the middle of a partial rewrite (working title)
<classified> (Clausewitz V) partial
Total words for all Clausewitz books (inc vol I):672k
Unnamed prequel to Clausewitz series65k75k
Clausewitz Series II29k

Other

This only includes things that I expect to turn into something publishable one day. I try not to include things for which I have no real idea how they’re going to be a worthwhile story.

TitleThenNow
Steampunk Portal Saga Thing (Yes, that’s my working title. I expect this to become a long series eventually.)0k36k
Alternate History Project20k

Influences: Joe Haldeman

The Forever War and its sequels. Did I like them? I’m not sure. But do I ever remember them. The scale, the inconsequentialness of the people. The tragedy. The sequels got a bit weird and seemed less profound. I’m sure those of you who look at the Total War setting will easily see some influences in the wormholes and the scale af space travel and maybe also in the military bits.

So, I don’t know if you’ll like it, but if you haven’t I’d certainly suggest reading Haldeman. I really only feel The Forever War is the one you truly shouldn’t miss.

The Forever War

Influences: Iain M. Banks

In my humble opinion, Mr. Banks is one of the great science fiction writers who deserves a place with the great ones like Heinlein and Burroughs. I particularly like his Culture novels, though even the other ones, including Feersum Endjinn all introduced ideas and a descriptive style that resonated with me. I doubt I’ll ever be write as well as Banks, but his worlds have been inspirational, giving a feeling for just how far you can go with science fiction. I wouldn’t call his work terribly easy to read or even all that accessible, but it’s absolutely worth the effort.

Feersum Endjinn
The Use of Weapons
The Player of Games
The Hydrogen Sonata
Look to Windward
Inversions
Excession
Consider Phlebas
The State of the Art
Matter
Surface Detail
The Algebraist

Sunset at 110k+ words!

Sunset, the life story of an important character that features in the Tales of Vatan: Alagariel series, passed through the hundred thousand word (100k) barrier this week. This really a chronological collection of stories that one character in the world experienced and it’s served as a way to give the world and recent history of Vatan more depth and colour.

I generally consider “full book” status to be achieved from about 125k words. At the moment, I feel there are at least  two large sections still to write, as there’s stll more than a hundred years to cover. So, it’s possible that Sunset will end up being a long one. I don’t anticipate two volumes, but you never know.

Belle de Serraient, on of Sunset’s many guises.

Influences: Dan Simmons

Simmon’s Hyperion Cantos (Hyperion, The Fall of Hyperion, Endymion, The Rise of Endymion),series is a wonderful work that weaves a wonderfully complex future world. The Canterbury Tales style telling of a large part of it, the wonderful references to 19th century poets and poetry and all the other strangeness are an intriguing example of how all sorts or real world history can be woven into a captivating science fiction story. The use of real world history, particularly military history is woven in throughout the the Total War setting.

This series is one I enjoyed reading immensely, so if you haven’t read it, I’d strongly recommend giving it a go.

Hyperion
The Fall of Hyperion
Endymion
The Rise of Endymion

Influences: Robin Hobb

I very much enjoyed the Farseer Trilogy and it has always been an example of what I feel a fantasy series should be. I must admit that I could never quite get my head around the quaint names, but it really doesn’t detract from the quality of the series.

I would be hard pressed to describe exactly in what way Hobb’s work influences the The Tales of Vatan setting. I’d say that the feeling the Elderling world evokes is something that I’d like to convey in my fantasy works. In any event, I’d strongly recommend Hobb’s work to any fantasy fan.

The Assassin’s Apprentice
Royal Assassin
Assassin’s Quest

Influences: Robert Heinlein

The work of Robert Heinlein, one of the fathers of science fiction has been a big influence on the Total War setting. Most people know him from the book Starship Troopers and the awful movies that are based on it. (My apologies to the movie fans, but if you read the book first, the movie was a grand disappointment.) The book is part military coming of age novel, part political and social treatise, which are all themes that are at least a little present in the Clausewitz series.

Heinlein wrote much more than Starship Troopers. Stranger in a Strange Land tells the story of a human who grew up among aliens on Mars returning to Earth for the first time, giving a point of view of human society that’s just a wonderful exploration of our strange habits. Glory Road is one of my favourites. It’s a fantasy book, essentially and the story told seems to resonate though I never really know why. I think it appeals to everyone’s sense of adventure. The list of Heinlein’s work which can get very weird and even pornographic, exploring all sorts of taboos, is all intriguing. That man’s mind must have been an interesting place.

Here are Amazon links to some of my favourites and yes, I may earn a commission if you purchase through these links.

Starship Troopers
Glory Road
Stranger in a Strange Land